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 Post by: asokani
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 ID 17306
 Date: 11/22/2008


URGENT CASE...PLS EVERYBODY HELP ME.
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Mnh gửi thư ny cho bạn trai, biết l mắc nhiều lỗi sai. Nhưng mnh đ cố gắng, mnh post ln nhờ mấy bạn thng thi dịch lại dm mnh nh. Để c 1 love letter gửi cho bạn trai mnh ging sinh ny. Thanks so for all.

Dear Darling,

This present is not valuable itself, but it is a souvenir , it brings all most my warm sentiment to you.
Pls colse ur eyes and dreams become so real..its like im stading right infornt of you. You are my sunshine, my only sunshine to warm me in this winter. You make me happy when skies are grey.
Pls burn this candles to pray for our love and warm our soul. I'm so sorry,I wish that I could be there to celebrate it with you, but that is impossible. I send along my love and affection.
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH, I belive in you and me that's this love will never end Darling. Hoping that you will love me forever same as the first time and you are always besides me.

I'm sure even when we're apart, distance can never change the love i have for you in my heart . Pls, take care my love. This winter will pass very fast , i promise u i'll be there soon.

Princess.



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 Reply: sinnombre
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 REF: 99011
 Date: 11/22/2008


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Post by: asokani
member
ID 17306
Date: 11/22/2008

AN URGENT CASE OF...(space) PLS EVERYBODY! HELP ME.

Mnh gửi thư ny cho bạn trai, biết l mắc nhiều lỗi sai. Nhưng mnh đ cố gắng, mnh post ln nhờ mấy bạn thng thi dịch lại dm mnh nh. Để c 1 love letter gửi cho bạn trai mnh ging sinh ny. Thanks so for all. (I thank you all for your assistance/help.)

Dear(*) Darling,

This present is not valuable itself, but it is a souvenir , it brings all most almost all my warm sentiment to you.
Pls colse ur Please close your eyes and dreams become so real..its It's like im I'm stading standing right infornt in front of you. You are my sunshine, my only sunshine to warm me in this winter. You make me happy when skies are grey(**) .
Pls. burn light(***) this candles candle to pray for our love and warm our souls. I'm so sorry,space I wish that I could be there to celebrate it with you, but that is impossible. I send along my love and affection.
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH, I believe in you and me that's, and I also believe that this love will never end, Darling darling. Hoping Hope that you will would love me forever, and your love for me would stay the same as the first time we met, and you are would always be besides beside me.

I'm sure even when we're apart, distance can never change the love i I have for you in my heart . Pls, Pls. take care my love. This winter will pass very fast , i I promise u i'll you I'll be there soon.

Princess.



Asokani dear,

Please understand that I've never and will never claim that I am knowledgeable. Your letter is okay, I simply just correct some of the grammatical errors and tweaked it a little (as best as I could understand your English and what you are trying to say). That's all.

My choice of words and my writing would be very different if I were to write this letter 'cause every one has his/her own unique style of writing :).

Hope this helps! :-)




Darling,

This gift you are getting may not be in itself valuable. However, I hope you know that it is a gift of love. It is memorable as well as it is priceless 'cause it conveys all of my love that is deep down from the bottom of my heart for you.

Please close your eyes and envision that I am standing right there in front of you..., and your dream will soon become a reality, honey. You are my sunshine, the only sunshine that warms my heart in the winters and makes me happy when I am feeling blue.

Please light a candle to warm our souls as well as to pray for our love. I am so sorry, I wish that I could be there to celebrate this moment with you, but I can't. So, I am sending this to you darling, along with all my love and effection.

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. I believe in you and me and that our love will never end. Darling, I hope that you will always be beside me, that you would love me forever, that you would love me as much as the first time we met, and that our love will be an everlasting one.

Although we are far apart I am sure that distance can never change the love I have in my heart for you. Please take good care of yourself, my love! This winter will soon end, and I promise I'll be there at the end of this winter, darling.

Love,
Princess.
XOX



Note:

(*) One should avoid "linguistic redundancy". In other words, please try not to be needlessly wordy or repetitive in expression. So! There is no need to use "dear" when you already use "darling", "sweetheart", "honey", "my love", "sugar", "babe", "candy"... etc.. 'Cause this is "redundant".
(**) You should be saying your honest feelings instead of copying the "you are my sunshine's lyrics".
(***) You do not "burn" a candle. You "light" it, Asokani. :-)


 
 Reply: asokani
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 REF: 99012
 Date: 11/22/2008


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First, i must say thank you to you so much for corrected my mistake and show me how to write a love letter by your way.
Nice to hear from you again after so long time.
Uhm...maybe i reply you like this, i'll get another correct from you after that right ? Anyway, thanks for your sharing. I'm glad..

So sorry i has send to him before i got ur comment 15min ago. Oh.. that's terrible for him.
Hope next time im lucky with your help.
Have a lovely weekend.
KANI


 
 Reply: sinnombre
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 REF: 99013
 Date: 11/22/2008


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asokani
member
REF: 99012
Date: 11/22/2008

First of all, i I must say thank you to you so much for corrected correcting my mistakes, and for showing me how to write a love letter by your way.
Nice to hear from you again after so long time.
Uhm... maybe, i after reply replying to you like this, i'll I'll get another correction from you. after Is that right? Anyway, thanks for your sharing. I'm glad..

So sorry, i has send I had sent my letter to him fifteen minutes before i I got ur your comments 15min ago. Oh..! that's That's terrible for him.
Hope next time im I will be lucky luckier with your help.
Have a lovely weekend.
KANI



Dear Asokani,

I am pleased to hear from you again, too. Glad that everything is well with you.

I did not show you how to write a love letter my way dear. I simply just corrected your grammatical errors and tweaked it a tiny bit so that your reader or readers can understand what you wanted to say a little easier. That was all I did, dearie dear.

May your life be filled with love and happiness dear!

Sincerely yours,
Sinnombre.


 
 Reply: asokani
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 REF: 99014
 Date: 11/23/2008


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^_^ Smile is good for you,Sinnombre.

 
 Reply: sinnombre
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 REF: 99015
 Date: 11/23/2008


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Reply: asokani
member
REF: 99014
Date: 11/23/2008

^_^ Smile! It is good for you, Sinnombre.



Asokani dearie,

The sentence you wrote is grammatically incorrect dear.

^_^ Smile is good for you,Sinnombre.

Should be:

1). ^_^ Smiling is good for you, Sinnombre.
2). ^_^ Smile! It's good for you, Sinnombre.



:-) :-) :-)


*The shortest distance between two people is a smile. ~Author Unknown
*I've never seen a smiling face that was not beautiful. ~Author Unknown
*Everyone smiles in the same language. ~Author Unknown
*If you don't have a smile, I'll give you one of mine. ~Author Unknown


 
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